A little bit of inspiration
Since we start the school this year we have read some poems in school with our poetry teacher so hes thought it would be a good idea to make us write a poem with one of this topics in 12 line. The options were:
-A poem that describes what you found when you are coming home.
-A poem that describes how your parents met and fell in love
-A poem that describes someone you realy like.
I have choose the last one and talk about someone I like so here we go:
-A poem that describes what you found when you are coming home.
-A poem that describes how your parents met and fell in love
-A poem that describes someone you realy like.
I have choose the last one and talk about someone I like so here we go:
My angel
I have fall for you as you from the sky
Only the your look can make me smile
And loosing you tonight
Is something I'm having nightmares about
I see you for a single moment
And found a thousand things I love about you
Your smile could light up New York City at the dark
And it's not a secret the you make me blush
When you go and I'm alone
you live in my imagination
Please believe me, don't you see
The things you mean to me?
The things you mean to me?
Very good work Victoria!!
ResponderEliminarYou have done a sweet good job on rhyme. You´ve also included metaphors and similes.
There are some spelling/typing mistakes which obscure communication at times. I suggest you revise your texts before publishing.
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